12/28/2007

Wreckage

(Inspired by Superchick's song, "Courage")

They both had their vices.
She starved herself to perfection. He bled to attain peace.
They both had each other.
He didn't tell her to eat. She didn't tell him to put the blade away.
They sat in silence, away from accusers. No judgment, no expectations.

They suffered. They weren't good enough. But in their short time together, they didn't need to be.

At times, they talked. They talked about the things they couldn't tell the others. They knew they wouldn't scare them, like so many others had been scared. They listened, but didn't offer opinion or rebuke. They accepted.

It was decided that they influenced each other negatively. It was decided that they would no longer spend time together. It was decided that even a goodbye was inappropriate.

They added their separation to their long list of sorrows. They no longer had a friend who could listen to their tales of suffering. And so they suffered more.

Many years, hospitalizations, and rehab visits later, they had a chance meeting. They sat. They talked. They listened.

For hours, they spoke of what had happened. It grew late.

They rode the city bus home, still in each other's company. They didn't want to go back. Back to the many nameless faces that ran their lives.

They looked in each other's eyes, about to bid farewell.


They never spoke the words.
They were found in the wreckage by the paramedics, dead on impact.

20 comments:

Lauren said...

You should write books that you can later make into short films while you're on tour with your rock band.

RRock_With_It said...

Sounds like a good idea <:) (whatever happened to the party hats of doom?)

Lauren said...

<:( They deflated and we couldn't buy any new ones.
Can I do the soundtrack?

RRock_With_It said...

Sure, I'd like to see what you come up with.
I made a party hat of doom out of cardboard and filled it with pop-its and rocks.

Lauren said...

Sounds dangerous and a little crazy, but not to nice to wear.
Aaargh, I'm making one for "Pride and Prejudice", how nerdy is that?

RRock_With_It said...

It was actually kind of lame, you had to shake it a while and every 2 seconds something would pop.

RRock_With_It said...

No, that sounds cool. I once used all Classic Crime songs for the soundtrack for one story I made up.

Lauren said...

Yeah, but these are stuffy English people with prodigious sideburns who go to balls all the time.
Were they the pop-its that burst into flame? I love those.

RRock_With_It said...

No, do they even have those? That's cool. I had the lame ones. :(

Lauren said...

I don't think they make them anymore, because I can't find them.

RRock_With_It said...

They always take away my explosives. :(

Lauren said...

Next thing you know, they'll be doing away with Pop rocks.

RRock_With_It said...

They almost did. There was a rumor that someone died from drinking a ton of soda and eating poprocks.

Lauren said...

I think that was on Mythbusters.

RRock_With_It said...

They tested the myth on there. They used a pig's stomach.

Lauren said...

I forgot the end result.

RRock_With_It said...

It can't kill you. It just causes discomfort. And it takes a LOT of soda and poprocks.

Lauren said...

Ha. That would be a fun experiment with lab rats.
Only I like rats....

Lauren said...

I heard they explode. Like little bombs.

RRock_With_It said...

:)